Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?

Parents always give priority to their children’s life, the environment in which their children grow up is one of the biggest considerations. They believe it plays an important role in their childrens’ success. Some people think children growing up in a city have more advantages than living in a countryside, while others stand on the opposite site. For my own opinion, I do believe that growing up in a city helps children to have more qualified life and education.

Children who grow up in the city have better opportunities to stay abreast of the latest technologies, such as advanced device...

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