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Some people say success is '10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work'.
Is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important?
Everyone wants to be success in their live. Success can be meant as achieving anything or becomes someone else. But what the most important is to be success. Some people say that you need a natural talent to be a successful man. However, not a few people that success comes from hard-working life. In my point of view, both of them are quiet hand in hand and is needed to make our way to success easier.
On the disadvantages perspective, If you were born with a talent such as ability to produce a beautiful voice or able to solve complex mathematics reasoning, you are one step ahead rather than ...
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Sentence: For example, a prodigy child with a music talent is required to train their gift by playing music intrument regularly.
Error: intrument Suggestion: instrument
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