Some People think that all school should learn a foreign language. Others think that a student should not be required to learn a foreign language if he or she does not have talent for it.
It is true that every single student at school should study a foreign language which will be useful to support them to improve their knowledge. People believe that student who do not have talents will be failed or do for nothing. This essay will explain about learning any other languages for pupils.
A foreign language is very important for scholars to gain benefits in higher level of their education, and they are able to obtain more references from other western resources, so they will select something which one is better than the others. A language can also help educated people to communic...
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Sentence: A language can also help educated people to communicate each others in long distance by understanding contents of the conversation.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and others
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when they do not have good ability.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 160 200
The first reason should talk about 'students' not 'scholars'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1549 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.841 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.557 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.446 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5