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Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. What do you think ?
Education in school is one way to educate students. There are a variety of methods to teach them. In society, people argue that the best pattern of study is making learners are fearful of the mentor, meanwhile other opinions assume a friendly relation is best applied among them. I believe, combination two models could potentially lead to better results.
It is important that students should be fearful to their instructor. In a fact, a pressure or forcing in study brings about successful students. They practice toughly due to punishments from tutors, if they fail in an examination. In this si...
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people argue that the best pattern of study is making learners are fearful of the mentor,
Description: two verbs in one sentence.
Sentence: In this situations.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and situations
Sentence: However, some education observers are rather dubious about a strict teaching method because the youngsters, who go to school, may lose passion in the subject and they to avoid to the teacher with their problems.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by to
Suggestion: Refer to they and to
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Avg. Sentence Length: 13.429 21.0
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1411 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.004 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.752 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.569 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.476 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.231 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.408 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5