Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are they key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the many parts of the world, traffic safety is always a top priority to concern. There are those who argue that strict punitive measures imposing on driving offenders are the good solution in minimizing traffic accidents, while others say believe that improving traffic infrastructures, such as building road safety, could be more effective. In this essay, i will explore both sides of this controversial issue.
It can not to deny that strict punishments could give immediate effects on reducing traffic accidents. These strict punitive measures, for example, might be charging huge fines, long...
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