Some of people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judje right and wrong and how to behave well.
Nowadays, problems about children behaviour become warm discussing. It is happened in mass media as like television, social media, news paper and magazine. Time by time children is loss control. They are not feels ashame anymore to steady in school. That is why appears opinion that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judje right and wrong and how to behave well. Refers to statement above, having lessons that aim to distinguish right and wrong and how to behave well is important for children.
Judje right and wrong and having behaved well is important for children. In modern condition, children have faced by televisions that lead them to wrong way. Most contain of television is how the way to immitate popular culture. Popular culture teaches children how to judje right and wrong by right and wrong according to popular culture itself. It is very dengerous for new generation that will change position old generation.
In addition, refers to latest research almost 30% children that in junior high school are having free sex and reached 50% of student in junior high school ever kissing. There are many reasons of doing free sex; one of them is curiousity. The main caused of doing free sex in children group is a judje right and wrong of children itself. They did not have self control to protect them from environment. Teachers have to response this situation by teaching them how to judje wrong and right and have behave well. To teaching judjement wrong and right and to behave well are necessary.
Finally, teacher has responsibility to lead students get good grade in school and help students understand wrong and right to protect them from bad effect of environment.
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Sentence: It is very dengerous for new generation that will change position old generation.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to position and old
Sentence: The main caused of doing free sex in children group is a judje right and wrong of children itself.
Description: An adjective, semantically superlative is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to main and caused
Sentence: Teachers have to response this situation by teaching them how to judje wrong and right and have behave well.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and behave
Sentence: To teaching judjement wrong and right and to behave well are necessary.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to judjement and wrong
Sentence: They are not feels ashame anymore to steady in school.
Error: ashame Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: That is why appears opinion that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judje right and wrong and how to behave well.
Error: judje Suggestion: judge
Sentence: Most contain of television is how the way to immitate popular culture.
Error: immitate Suggestion: imitate
Sentence: Popular culture teaches children how to judje right and wrong by right and wrong according to popular culture itself.
Error: judje Suggestion: judge
Sentence: It is very dengerous for new generation that will change position old generation.
Error: dengerous Suggestion: dangerous
Sentence: There are many reasons of doing free sex; one of them is curiousity.
Error: curiousity Suggestion: curiosity
Sentence: The main caused of doing free sex in children group is a judje right and wrong of children itself.
Error: judje Suggestion: judge
Sentence: Teachers have to response this situation by teaching them how to judje wrong and right and have behave well.
Error: judje Suggestion: judge
Sentence: To teaching judjement wrong and right and to behave well are necessary.
Error: judjement Suggestion: judgement
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No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Different Words: 141 200
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Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1390 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.86 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.418 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.208 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.199 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5