The table and bar chart show how journey times in city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and bar chart give information about the changing average journey time after enhancements of transport network, and the price of using various forms of transport in the city.
Generally, average journey time after betterment of transport network was shorter than before, except car. It was mean that the people who use public transports became faster arrived to their destination. On the other hand, travelers that used car became slower than earlier.
The fastest way of getting around the city before and after the network improvements was taxi. But, the changing was not significant, only three minutes faster than before. Tram had the biggest changing on average travel time, that was six minutes faster than in the past.
The bar chart shows the amount payment of each transport. Taxi was the most expensive transport while bus was the cheapest one.
In short, after the advance network, travelers could enjoy low cost journey in the city by public transport faster than before.
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