The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about distinctive transport, which people use trip to work in one city in United States of America.

Overall, car with passengers is the longest journey and also the quickest way to travel to work. By comparison with car, cycle and walk is the shortest and also the slowest transport.

Inhabitants who use car more than one person are the longest journeys at average 24 miles, whilst inhabitants who ride bicycle and also pedestrians have the shortest journey just four miles to reach their work. Train and bus are longer journey than car drivers without passengers on average distance 23 and 17 miles.

Public transport and car without passengers spend the most time to work, around 49 and 33 minutes. The shortest times are cyclist and walkers on average time at 20 minutes.

The fastest transport to work is a car more than 1 person. However, walking is the slowest average speed at 3 mph. Public transport is slower than people who drive alone a car at 28 and 31 mph.

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