Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people said that lack of communication in family and society is caused by television. They think, nowadays, people prefer to watch TV rather than visiting communitists or relatives. Honestly, I cannot say either agree or disagree that TV can destroy family life and any sense of community.

Based on entertainment-tool usage, TV is the most popular tools which always entertain people. They love to spend their times in front of TV instead of doing outdoors activities, such as traveling, exercising, shopping; because those all activities need a lot of energy, time, and money to spend. It i...

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Sentence: Sometimes, people become closer with their relatives because of they have same interest of TV show.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to of and they

sometimes TV gives they chance to
sometimes TV gives their chance to

Sentence: This things become more interesting when people gossip about celebrity's life and curse on it.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to This and things
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and gossip

Sentence: They think, nowadays, people prefer to watch TV rather than visiting communitists or relatives.
Error: communitists Suggestion: communities

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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.414 7.5

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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1521 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.666 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.636 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.414 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.35 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5