The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. Summarise the information by choosing and reopting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The diagrams of coastal area of Brightsea show the changes from a fishing community in 1950 to a ferry terminal, with plans for future development.
In 1950, the coastal zone of Brightsea had a few public facilities which were only lighthouse and lighthouse keeper’s house. There was a jetty for fishing boats, and fishermen’s cottages for accommodation. According to the maps, the coastal area of Brightsea was terrible situation, because there were not main roads yet built for connecting with other areas.
Nowadays, we can be seen that certain development have changed place. There are m...
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