It's inevitable that technology rapid improvement has influenced our life, especially in telecommunication. Nowadays, many young generations, especially toddlers, are familiar with cell phones and using it on day to day. Some say that these trends give them bad influence.
There are many reasons that make parents give their kids cell phones. First, it's given for communication purpose. It will be easier for them to check their kids' activities when they're not around. Parents also believe that it's a good thing for kids to learn new technology. Currently, the cell phone development has shift...
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