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Today more people are travelling than ever before
Why is this the case?
What are benefits of travelling for the travelers?
In recent times, tours and travels have become common activity among pupil. Although, fuel prices are not as cheap as they used to be, still number of visitors around the world are on rise. This essay will elaborate on reasons and benefit of touring.
Globe trotting has increased considerably over time. one case is ease of visa process. Because tourism generates vast amount of wealth for a country, substantial number of tourist visa are being granted. Nations like Australia and New Zealand, which are considered as hot spots for travelers, have schemes such as working holiday visa. This visa ...
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