Todays, animals are used at a large scale to get benefits. On the other hand, Some observe that killing animals is against the nature.what are the reasons.Give your opinions.
In this rampant age of globalization, development is on the peak as a result of human beings's efforts and intellectuality. It is universally acknowledged that animals have been being a part of human when humanity came in being. To use of animals has both positive and negative influenced. Here I would like to state my opinions regarding this statement.
To set in, there are ample points to support my views, first and foremost, Indefinably, animals are considered to offer a bulk resources of nutritious food as milk, cheese and beef are phenomenal to bring up one physically. Moreover, in this industrialism, animals have been playing an instrumental role to flourish the business to making lather goods as per people demands. Besides this, animals like buffalo and ox have been seemed topest priority related to the agriculture and farmers, mostly in India.
In addition, the killing animals is unjustified to recover our needs as per our daily routine. It is universally accept that animals are the tremendous creation of nature that have right to survive too. Furthermore, there are a sheer proportion of animals are located at the every nook and corner of the earth with having families and similar feeling like human. Animals are owner of wild life and have a cycle of life beginning to ending. Adding to it, it is seemed critical issue to kill the animals to grind their own axe, For example, Mankind such a spices that try any kind of experiment on animals to archive success in adequate health conditions.
In a nutshell, after doing a great deal of my thoughts and deliberation, I would like to say that mankind and animals are magnificent fir each other, that is why, it makes responsibility of human beings to save our planet with taking steps regarding animals kindly because they are second appearance of God.
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