the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant
These two maps illustrate changes in an island after constructing tourist places. It is very obvious from comparing that this tourist place is well planned including all leisure facilities like swimming area, restaurant , walking track and accommodation places.
Before construction map shows beach on one side. There are two forest areas seen. One area is close to beach while other is on opposite side.
After construction it is seen that Entrance to island is more close to beach area . there is a vehicle track to the reception place. On the back of reception and almost opposite to pier place is restaurant. On both sides of reception is place for huts. There are six huts between reception and beach and nine huts on the other side. Huts in between beach and reception are surrounding trees and have nice walking path. There is nice swimming place designed on beach.
While on other side of beach more trees are seen. Between forest and reception area there are nine huts in a round circle. These huts have nice foot path. There is still a lot of empty space for more options in island. This space can be used for amusement park for children in future.
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 934 1000
No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.647 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.36 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.408 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4