It is debatable issue that whether universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject or not. It is undeniable that these days women occupy several important positions in the workplaces and work as hard as men who work in the same positions. In other words, there are not any different in skills and knowledge that are taught for both women and men while there are a lot of different between men and women in same position like amount of salaries and job circumstance.
On the one hand, universities should provide both male and female students with golden opport...
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Sentence: It is clear that accepting equal numbers of gender provide women with good opportunity to show their ability in every subject.
Description: The fragment gender provide women is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, past tense
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No. of Different Words: 156 200 (need more different words)
Avg. Sentence Length: 37 21.0 (Sentences should be shorter)
Sentence Length SD: 11.628 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 370 350
No. of Characters: 1852 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.386 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.005 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.508 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.628 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.45 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.678 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5