University should except equal number of male and female student in every subjest.To what extend do you agree and disagree.
University is a premise where an individual come to learn toward higher objective.If the universities discharge their duties adequately then it is well with the nation an d people.I do except the equal number of both male and female student in every subject.
A nation consist of both male and female and they have the right to study.Unlike previous century where male are consider superior is substituted with women empowerment.So university being a center for individual to learn,equality should be there regardless of gender.For the development of a nation both gender contribution is consider so female should not be left behind in the field of study.As saying goes behind every successful man there is a woman.Today's child are future seed of ones nation so moult and educate them equally. for examples,the impact of provision and development of opportunities for female student,now a day we can find lots of female who move along with men in field of politics,technology,medical and sports.
Women differs from men in physical terms may lack to reach some field where men dominates. for example,in physical education women fail to compete and perform well as compared to men.Some outdoor games like football and athletics events,but if priority toward female is given along with sternous practices,a day will soon come where male and female will be on same platform.
In conclusion for ones own nation growth and development male and female should be provided with equality in studies in university.
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Sentence: A nation consist of both male and female and they have the right to study.Unlike previous century where male are consider superior is substituted with women empowerment.
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Sentence: For the development of a nation both gender contribution is consider so female should not be left behind in the field of study.As saying goes behind every successful man there is a woman.
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Sentence: Women differs from men in physical terms may lack to reach some field where men dominates. for example,in physical education women fail to compete and perform well as compared to men.
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