When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is true that technology is needed by countries and they always try to improve it to be better. While I accept it is giving a lot of benefits, I believe that traditional skills and ways of life are important and they never become expired skills.
Nowadays, most of the countries cannot operate their activities well without technology because it helps nations to fulfill society prosperous. All government sectors such as military, economic, and industry use it to support their occupations. When national security in a country is not supported by modern technology, it will make a nation in dang...
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Sentence: Nowadays, most of the countries cannot operate their activities well without technology because it helps nations to fulfill society prosperous.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to society and prosperous
Sentence: All government sectors such as military, economic, and industry use it to support their occupations.
Description: The fragment industry use it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace use with verb, past tense
flaws:
Need to talk more why 'keep them alive'.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1807 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.033 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.633 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.106 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5