When a country develops its technology,the traditional skills and way of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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When a country develops its technology,the traditional skills and way of life die out.
It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Sentence: As per millenia have passed skills of traditional is seems to die out nowadays.And according to my point of view we should work hard to kept them alive.
Description: The fragment out nowadays . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace nowadays with adjective
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to todays and world
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and seems
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and kept

Sentence: Technology plays an important role in todays world.As per millenia have passed skills of traditional is seems to die out nowadays.And according to my point of view we should work hard to kept them alive.
Error: millenia Suggestion: millennia

Sentence: In conclusion,people should beaware more and more about traditional skills and its benifits.So future will be more safer while using old techniques.
Error: beaware Suggestion: beware
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits

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No. of Words: 222 350

Minimum 250 words wanted.

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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 222 350
No. of Characters: 1129 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.86 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.754 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.451 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.536 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.907 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.23 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5