When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Success is a dream each people, all people are sure want to success without except but sometime to become success, the people have to work hard so that materialized. People sure ever experience, success is a dream each people, all people are sure want to success without except but sometime to become success, the people have to work hard so that materialized. In the following paragraph I will try to support my answer with some reason and example.
First of all, sometimes people judgment if they already try tooth and nail but result that desired cannot match with reality. One of all them their give reason factor lucky. It is because they become lazy and they think work hard that cannot result or the order way sometimes people that guess without work before.
The failed them that work hard make they think if everything that they do cannot success. Before they do, they every think like that they cannot success. On the contrary, for they try to do manner monotone. Work is manner responsibility will bring your salary, position that they dream until they are forget principal about factor lucky.
Success someone is begin from their work hard and cannot know mean about luck someone. But people always judge people that success be related to luck. The realize visible is with work hard they get it all, they are work cannot time daylight and night, sure get result that good too.
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Sentence: The failed them that work hard make they think if everything that they do cannot success.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and success
Sentence: Before they do, they every think like that they cannot success.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to they and every
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and success
Sentence: Success someone is begin from their work hard and cannot know mean about luck someone.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and begin
Sentence: The realize visible is with work hard they get it all, they are work cannot time daylight and night, sure get result that good too.
Description: An article is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to The and realize
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and time
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Words: 241 350
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Average Word Length: 4.651 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 7.407 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.205 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5