Worker in low-wage industries should be provided with a guaranteed minimum income and benefits to ensure that they can provide for themselves and their families.
Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion.
In most countries, now one of the most significant purposes which leaders would achieve is improvement of the life of their community though relevant policies.A part of these policies is for poor people. Despite legitimate concerns about government should support low-income workers, the greater wisdom is on the site of necessary backing.
Perhaps, the most effective line of reasoning on the part of those who advocate government's support for poor people is to point out that they deserve to afford the essentials for life. It is difficult to deny that many workers who have poor financial backg...
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Sentence: Besides, it is really hard for low-income workers to access the health care and education system while these people are easyly to come down with deseases because they live prevalently under poor condition.
Error: deseases Suggestion: diseases
Error: easyly Suggestion: easily
Sentence: Additonal key component of the case for goverment's backing to poor people is that these people are becoming more difficult to survice because of inflation as long as everything is much more expensive.
Error: survice Suggestion: survive
Sentence: As is self-evident, low-income workers always have to chase the elavation of prices.
Error: elavation Suggestion: elevation
Sentence: Moreover, government's support for poor workers contributes to narrow the gap between rich and poor peole.
Error: peole Suggestion: people
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 256 350
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Write the essay with more vocabulary words. You may add a conclusion paragraph.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 256 350
No. of Characters: 1320 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.156 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.799 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.295 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.583 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5