Write a letter to the accommodation officer at your college. In your letter
-explain the situation
-describe the accommodation you require
-say when you will need it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have recently enrolled in a three-year bachelor degree at St Johns College and will be commencing my course in Semester 1 2013. Thus, I am writing to enquire about 2013 room vacancies at the college’s on-campus accommodation.
I will be arriving two to three weeks before the start of my studies on 1st of March 2013 as I wish to settle down, meet other fellow students and become familiar with the surroundings beforehand. Hence, I would appreciate if I can secure a room around that date for a minimum period of 1 year, if possible.
I am particularly interested in singl...
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