You borrowed a tour guide book from your friend which was very useful. Write a letter and say
- Why was it helpful for you?
- When will you return this book?
- Thank him/her for this guide book.
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter find you well. It is been a long time since I saw you. As you remember you gave me a tour book about Esfahan.
At the first, I should thank you for this amazing book, and say without this book I certainly had some problems. I have recently applied for a job as tour guide. One of the requirements of this job was have enough information about Esfahan and other historical city like Shiraz and so on. I completely read this book before my interview, and at the end I got accepted and got a job.
Buddy, I have a small party for my new job. I am grateful if you accept my invitation and come to my place at next weekend around 5 pm. If you come, I will return your book otherwise I can post your book on Monday.
Once again, I thank you for your helping and gave me your book. I am bagging you If you have some books like it, please barrow it to me. Please feel free and contact me via my email or call me whether you coming or not.
With the best wishes,
Mari.
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It is been a long time
It has been a long time
Sentence: One of the requirements of this job was have enough information about Esfahan and other historical city like Shiraz and so on.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to was and have
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 736 1000
No. of Different Words: 109 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.853 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.144 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 23 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 4.647 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.641 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.327 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4