You have seen a job advertisement in some newspaper. Write a letter to your friend asking him to consider this job. Please say
- Where have you seen the ad?
- What is the job description?
- Why do you think, he is a suitable candidate for it?
Dear Bill,
I hope this letter find you well. I am writing to share some information with you.
Last day, I saw an especial job advertising in Daily Times newspaper. ITC institute announced there are some limited jobs vacancy for programmers and SQL administrators. However, people should meet some requirements before sending their CV. An eligible person should has more than five year’s experiences in each field. Moreover, they should have a university degree. Besides, in interview day, they should bring some recommendation letter from their ex employers.
As a programmer you should expert in programming languages like C#, and script languages like jQuery. You should familiar with concept like UML, RUP and so on. Furthermore, as a programmer you do not have to work from 7 to 5 every day. You have free time working.
I think this job is very good for you because of your situation and yours experiences. As mention at ad, you can also work at home, and this condition is very suitable for students like you.
Please do not be hesitate and call me whether you want send a CV or not.
Thank you,
Mari.
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An eligible person should has more than
An eligible person should have more than
Sentence: As a programmer you should expert in programming languages like C, and script languages like jQuery.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to should and expert
Sentence: You should familiar with concept like UML, RUP and so on.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to should and familiar
Please do not be hesitate and call me
Please do not hesitate and call me
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 186 200
No. of Characters: 865 1000
No. of Different Words: 126 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.693 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.651 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.742 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.949 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.636 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.241 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4