You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there. Describe what you saw and offer to take your friend there.
Dear Adji,
I just wanted to tell you a little bit about my holidays in France with my family in the last holiday. In there, we climbed a mountain wich name is Parleman and that located in France Alps. We use a car to climb up of the mountain. But in the half of the rip, we had to stop the car and we parked because the road is difficult to pass. So, we continued the journey on using the boots. The journey is very long and requires a struggle to get through.
Although this is the first time we climb, we strive to complete this climb but it took a struggle to be able to achieve. Everything would be replace when we arrived in peaks of the mountain, we could see amazing of scenery. In right side, I could see the town and the lake, and I could see the peaks of mont blanc on the left side of the mountain.
As you know, we often go to France on our holidays. It was so fun and we were enjoying there. So next time, I want to take you there. I am sure you will love it and enjoy the view there, you will get many benefits when climb the mountain walks.
I hope you can anwer it immediatelly.
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