You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Research Indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Personality is a dynamic and organized set of characteristics possessed by a person that uniquely influences his or her cognition, emotions, motivations, and behaviors in various situations. Personality also refers to the pattern of thoughts, feelings, social adjustments, and behaviors consistently exhibited over time that strongly influences one's expectations, self-perceptions, values, and attitudes. It also predicts human reactions to other people, problems, and stress. This essay will discuss about the relatively strong influence of genetics and environment in personality.
Genes are the...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
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