228 Describe a house/apartment that someone you know lives in.
You should say:
whose house/apartment this is
where the house/apartment is
what it looks like inside
and explain what you like or dislike about this person's house/ apartment
6.5 out of 9
for the question 'whose house/apartment this is', it doesn't need to talk about mortgage.
I could not understand what I should alter in my answers to get a higher score. It seems that I covered all the points but the score is low. I need your guidance. Thank you.
As we told you have two main issues:
1. hesitations with 'ehn' in the speeches.
2. off the topic, like the first question: 'whose house/apartment this is'. It is not related to the mortgage. You can relatively talk more than other users, other users just can't talk, but when you talk a lot, it may run out of the track.
Once you remove those two issues, the scores can be higher. You don't need to alter you answers.
Also In part II, the first two questions can put less time, more time should put on last two questions.