The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The given chart shows the fact about 4 European countries: Britain, France, Italy, and Germany spending the amount of money for six customer goods, namely photographic film, toys, CDs, perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos in thousand pounds sterling.
Not surprisingly, the four European countries have spent the highest money of the customer goods in photographic film and toys, although these countries reach troughs at tennis racquets and personal stereos. Then, the expenses of CDs and perfumes were ranked third and forth.
It can be observed that the expenses of Britain in all ca...
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.98 4.0
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