The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

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The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

The bar chart illustrates the share of problems individuals face when they get to ınhabit other countries.

It is clear that, the proportion of reported learning the local language is by far the highest among older people, whereas the percentage of reported finding somewhere to live and making friends for senior people iş higher than that for others.

According to the bar chart,54% of reported learning the local language is faced by older people, while the figure for 35-54 year old is nowhere near as high as that, at just over a third. The share of reported learning the local language which is faced by junior individuals stood at just under 30%.

When it comes to reported finding somewhere to live,the figures for individuals aged between 18 and 54 are on the bottom of the list,at nearly two fifths, by contrast that for older people iş not quite as high as that, at 22%. Finally, the proportion of reported making friends for younger individuals is twice as high as that for senior people with the figure for people in the age 35-54 category being lower than that for Junior people, at well over two fifths.

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