The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries..
The chart represents the percentage of challenges that people with various ages groups have to confront when they begin living in new places. There are some issues that people need to face : " learning the new local language","finding somewhere to live" and " making friends" .
As the chart shows, making friends is the most challenged for the ages groups of 18-34, namely 46% whereas it is the item which just held the lowest quantity for the groups of people over 55 years old, at 23%. In contrast, people at the ages
groups over 55 have a large amount of trouble in order to pick up the local language with 54%,while it is just 29% among the 18-34 years old.
it can be seen in the chart, people from 35-54 years old have the average percentage around 39% in finding accommodations. However, with the same challenge, the ages groups over 55 just have 22% in the total amount while the highest number with 40% is belonged to the people among 18-34 in finding places to live.
In conclusion, each ages groups also has the difficulties and challenges to struggle when they start living in a new country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...s; learning the new local language','finding somewhere to live' and &ap...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve' and ' making friends' . As the chart shows,...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Groups
... 23%. In contrast, people at the ages groups over 55 have a large amount of trouble ...
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Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e 18-34 years old. it can be seen in the chart, people from 3...
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Line 31, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lenge, the ages groups over 55 just have 22% in the total amount while the highes...
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Line 41, column 75, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'struggling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: struggling
...so have the difficulties and challenges to struggle when they start living in a new country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07653061224 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93681114616 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.6161222034 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.142857143 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173281604529 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993328518333 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705918677629 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101357953704 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622635311742 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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