The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart displays statistical information about the ages of people of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and possible future trends in 2050.
Beginning with the population in 2000, we can see that the majority of people in Italy were 15-59 years old whereas in Yemen reaching a 61, 1%, whereas during the same year in Yemen the percentage of people between 0 and 14 years old was slightly higher than the number of people with ages from 15 to 59, representing a 50, 1% and 46, 3% respectively. On the other hand, In Italy people older than 60 years represented almost a quarter of the total population (24, 1%) whereas in Yemen elder people achieved the lowest percentage.
Looking at the predictions for 2050, there are noticeable differences between the population of Yemen and Italy. When it comes to people between 0 and 14 years old, in Yemen the percentage will increase from 46,3% to 57,3%, while in Italy population of these ages will decrease significantly from 61,6% to 46,2%.
To sum up, we can see that there is an upward trend on the percentages of elder people in both countries.
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while in Italy population of these ages will decrease significantly from 61,6% to 46,2%
while in Italy the population of these ages will decrease significantly from 61.6% to 46.2%
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