The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts were given some report about how big population of honey-bee were in farmland and how much the honey they can produce in the United State from 1970 to 2010.

At a glance, in 1970, there were 4 million bee groups in the country. Afterward, they rose to approximately 4.2 million as the biggest population in 1980. Surprisingly, the trend of population honey-bee in where people called “Uncle Sam” was almost decreased slowly in each year. Started from 1980, the population of honey-bee was ironically developed. At the end, the government of the United State should be satisfied which had more than 1.7 million.

During the same period, the amount of honey which the groups produced was dropped. The movement of the bar from the chart showed fluctuation to produce honey from 1970 to 2010. In 1970, American bees were able to generate about 130,000 tons of honey, although they can produce almost 70,000 tons in 2010. Ultimately, about 70,000 tons honey-bee produced as the result.

To sum up, the charts provide information about farmland of honey-bee was dramatically decreased in developing population of honey-bee and producing honey. Nevertheless, there was not relationship between them when in 1980 the groups of honey-bee were grown, whereas quantity of honey was reduced.

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Sentence: The charts were given some report about how big population of honey-bee were in farmland and how much the honey they can produce in the United State from 1970 to 2010.
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Sentence: In 1970, American bees were able to generate about 130,000 tons of honey, although they can produce almost 70,000 tons in 2010.
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Ultimately, about 70,000 tons honey-bee produced as the result.
Ultimately, about 70,000 tons honey-bee are produced as the result.

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