The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how water was used in over the world from 1900 to 2000 and the table indicates the amount of water consumed in two countries: Brazil and Democratic Republic of CongGo.
In the line chart, the overall trend is that domestic use was always surpassed by the rest in the amount of water consumed. To specify, the consumption of water for domestic use increased slightly from about 50 km3 in 1900 to 100 km3 in 1960, before a gradual rise to 200 km3 in 2000. Similarly, after a light rise from 60 km3 in 1900 to 150 km3 in 1950, the amount of water used by industrial sector ...
- The graph shows the impact of vaccination on the incidence of whooping cough a childhood illness between 1940 and 1990 in Britain Summarise the information ny selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 90
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
- The diagram shows the process of making recycled paper from old newspaper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparison where relevant 88
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information and by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 90
while Brazil has the population of 176 million with the amount of irrigated land is 26500 km2,
while Brazil has the population of 176 million with the amount of irrigated land which is 26500 km2,
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