The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and the table reveal global water use during a century from 1900 and water expenditure in two nations in 2000. Overall, water for agriculture was used most in three sectors and the water consumption per person in Brazil was much greater than in Democratic Republic of Congo (D.R.C).

According to the first graph, within a 100 years, the agricultural water usage was always the leader and had an enormous increase. Starting with 500 km3 in 1900, it climbed rapidly to approximately 3000 km3 in 2000. Industrial water use and domestic water use started nearly the same level roughly 1...

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the water consumption per person in Brazil was much greater than in Democratic Republic of Congo (D.R.C).
the water consumption per person in Brazil was much greater than that in Democratic Republic of Congo (D.R.C).

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