The line graph demonstrates the series of sectors accounting for global water use while the table details Brazil and Congo's figure consumption in 2000.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that agriculture is the dominant sector using water around the world with the increase being the most dramatic in the whole recorded period; meanwhile, according to the table, the figure proportion in Brazil is much more higher in all parts than Congo.
In 1900, The water for Industrial and domestic use was nearly 0 km3; however, until 1950, after negligible growth, both of them started to separate into two ways. While there is a necessary and rapid climb in the formal use and finished about over 1000 km3, the latter for the same purpose just experienced a slight uptick and the percentage in the end-of-time survey was beneath half of industrial use. In contrast, Agriculture was dominant throughout the recorded time, due to the overtaking start (approximately 500), it is prior to surging to a high point and reaching a peak ( over 3000) in the final time surveyed.
Looking at the table, the divergences in water use between Brazil and Congo that all items in Brazil were much more common than in Congo. In terms of population, 176 million and 5.2 million were Brazil and Congo residents at that time perspective, that distance perhaps stemmed from the irrigated land. The figure in Brazil was 265 times higher than in Congo, leading to the consumption of water in the latter was just 8 m3 for each person.
- The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day 11
- The table below shows the amount of waste production in millions of tonnes in six different countries in three different years over a twenty year period 84
- The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain 11
- Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day 11
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...the figure proportion in Brazil is much more higher in all parts than Congo. In 1900, The...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surge'?
Suggestion: surge
...start approximately 500, it is prior to surging to a high point and reaching a peak ov...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ging to a high point and reaching a peak over 3000 in the final time surveyed. ...
^^
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igh point and reaching a peak over 3000 in the final time surveyed. Looking at...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58451457101 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5651804479 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.875 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123952780583 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622828577305 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480335852712 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884179993922 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423861737072 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...the figure proportion in Brazil is much more higher in all parts than Congo. In 1900, The...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'surge'?
Suggestion: surge
...start approximately 500, it is prior to surging to a high point and reaching a peak ov...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ging to a high point and reaching a peak over 3000 in the final time surveyed. ...
^^
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igh point and reaching a peak over 3000 in the final time surveyed. Looking at...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58451457101 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5651804479 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.875 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123952780583 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622828577305 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480335852712 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884179993922 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423861737072 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.