The graph below presents the car sales by village in 2013.
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The graph illustrates the number of new and second hand car sales by Holme Valley Car Group in seven different villages in 2013.
In 2013, the amount of new car sales in Meltham stood at 455, and then increased to 611 for second hand cars. Similarly, in Helmfirth, 544 new cars were sold in comparison to used car, at 650, which was the highest car sales amongst other villages. In contrast, the number of both new and second hand car sales in Netherton was considerably lower than other villages, at 95 and 120 respectively. These trends of minimal sales were followed by Netherton where 177 new c...
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