The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meatin a European country between 1979 and 2004

The supplied line graph illustrates the intake of fish, chicken, beef and lamb of a nation from Europe in a span of twenty five years from 1979 to 2004. It can be observed that eating of meat decreased except chicken.

To begin with, beef, lamb and chicken were the most eaten in 1979 with about 220 grams, 150 grams and 140 grams per person per week, respectively. There was a downward trend in beef and lamb consumption, although there was some fluctuations in between, it still dropped to about half in 2004 whereas chicken intake steadily increased to almost 250 grams per person per week after two and a half decades.

Fish, on the other hand, was the least preferred meal in 1979 with only a little more than 50 grams per per person per week. It slightly decreased until 2004 with only about 40 grams per person per week.

To sum, chicken consumption had an upsurge popularity whilst the remaining three declined.

Votes
Average: 8 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: per
...9 with only a little more than 50 grams per per person per week. It slightly decreased ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'still', 'whereas', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24861878453 0.268076937826 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.104972375691 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0552486187845 0.0759168565197 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552486187845 0.0366838410393 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0165745856354 0.0131127313244 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.193370165746 0.155750635184 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0165745856354 0.0379272487307 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.35000558561 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276243093923 0.0210936926555 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0718232044199 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00552486187845 0.00437022459523 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 927.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.9 83% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68711656442 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.263803680982 0.337110787985 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171779141104 0.247514529752 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134969325153 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0736196319018 0.112407865282 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35000558561 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 54.5423604021 49.3433353143 111% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2857142857 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9469152923 42.9750493124 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 40.4636283961 47.7609492067 85% => OK
Elegance: 2.59375 2.94281807926 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256421846991 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173465861428 0.181151798455 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131883480431 0.0850326197045 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.787193581411 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145205956502 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128340361796 0.228904883108 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998132916202 0.108899403657 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19762544849 0.367819155151 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144853500906 0.0812612215331 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163820288842 0.316326947829 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955963512913 0.0921553760075 104% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK

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Rates: 77.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9