The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares how much three kinds of spreads, namely margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter, were consumed between 1981 and 2007.
Overall, while the consumption of margarine and butter went down, that of low fat & reduced spreads saw an upward trend.
Looking at the graph in detail, in 1981, just over 140 grams of butter were consumed, the highest figure in this year. Butter consumption then increased and peaked at 160 before going through a period of sharp decline and reaching 70 grams in 2007. The downward trend was also recorded in the consumption of margarine. ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-05-28 | staroongirl | 78 | view |
| 2018-05-28 | staroongirl | 56 | view |
- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 nad 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp 90
- The graphs below show the number of men and women in full and part time employment in Australia between 1973 and 1993 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 30
- In some countries governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 70
- The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 87
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 76
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 199 200
No. of Characters: 924 1000
No. of Different Words: 109 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.643 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.349 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.22 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.407 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.62 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4