The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The graph depicts the information regarding the Burnaby Public Library between 2011-2014. It shows the total amount of books read by both men and women.

According to the data given, it shows an obvious difference of the total of books read by men and women. Starting with lesser then the women, men only read about 3000 books in 2011. But it began to show a significant accession from 2012 until 2014 where it hit 14000 total of books.

However, the graph shows a different chronology about the number of books read by women in those four different years. Although women started wit a higher total of books being read with 5000 in 2011, 8000 in 2012, and the same amount of books read by men in 2013 with 10000, it then began to fall to almost half the number of books read by men in 2014 with only 8000 books.

The graph shows that although the popularity of reading books showed firstly by women, apparently through the years it changed with men reading most books then women in 2014.

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The graph depicts the information regarding the Burnaby Public Library
The graph depicts the information at the Burnaby Public Library

Starting with lesser then the women,
Starting with less than the women,

men reading most books then women in 2014.
men reading most books than women in 2014.

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