The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.
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The line graph indicates the figures of passengers to use Underground station in London in a typical day.
From the first glance of the line graph, the number of passengers fluctuates wildly during a day. From 6 am to 8 am, there is a significant rise in passengers and the number of figure reaches the first peak with 400 at 8 am. However, for two hours, between 8 and 10 am, it drops quickly and accounts for about 170 at 10 am. After that it goes up again and accounts for around 300 before the number of passengers declines the second times of the day. The number of people who use Underground station the least at 16pm, just under 100 before there is a dramatic upward trend and the figure reaches to the second peak around 380 at 19 pm. From 20 pm and 22 pm, it continues having a slight fluctuation and obtains around 130 at the end of the day at 22 pm.
It is concluded that people use the most Underground station at 8 am and 19 am and the lowest figures belong to at 6 am and 16 pm.
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The number of people who use Underground station the least at 16pm, just under 100 before there is a dramatic upward trend
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people use the most Underground station at 8 am and 19 am
people use the Underground station most at 8 am and 19 am
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 193 200
No. of Characters: 783 1000
No. of Different Words: 89 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.057 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.427 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.578 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.47 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.635 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.169 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4