The chart gives information about the number of people using the the Underground Station of London on a typical day from 6 am to 10 pm.
Overall, the amount of passengers fluctuates through out the whole day, with 8 am and 6 pm being the busiest times.
In the morning, there is a sharp increase from only 100 people using the station at 6 am to a peak of 400 people using it at 8 am. This number, however, falls dramatically afterward to about 175 people at 10 om. Over the next 2 hours, the number climbs up gradually to approximately 275 passengers then remains stable at under 300 passengers for another 2 hours.
In the afternoon, after 2 pm, the amount of station users plummets to the lowest point of under 100 people at 4 pm before it surges to a peak of just under 400 users at 6 pm. This number fell significantly in the next 2 hours, followed by a light increase from 8 pm, 10 pm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...mation about the number of people using the the Underground Station of London on a typi...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...mation about the number of people using the the Underground Station of London on a typi...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ll, the amount of passengers fluctuates through out the whole day, with 8 am and 6 pm being...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'om' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'oms'.
Suggestion: oms
...lly afterward to about 175 people at 10 om. Over the next 2 hours, the number clim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31176470588 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6212400985 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2721222814 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132425875263 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723596162806 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404143205818 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882346413318 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500346298611 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.