The graphs analysed give information about computer ownership according to percentage criteria of population or of educational level in the period of time 2000−2010.
The two graphs present similarities since they were carried on in the same period of time and the final percentage reached approximately the 80% although the second graph had a range from 0 to 100.
The first graph shows that during the period of time 2002−2004 the ownership of computers was fixed with around 60% and then had a small but regular rise in the following years until 2010 when computer owners reached a pick with a percentage between 70 and 80%.
The second one on the other side, presents differences between computer owners who had a complete education and who, instead, had not in the period of 2002 and of 2010. In fact computer ownership in 2002 was just 10% for no high school diploma while tended to increase for postgraduate qualification with a percentage of about 60.
In 2010 instead the level of ownership was quit high starting already from 40% for no high school diploma and continuing to rise constantly until the highest level of education represented by Postgraduate qualification with 80%.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 970 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.826 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.812 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.829 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
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