improvement of Rye mouth village between 1995 and Present.
A glance of these two maps provided reveals improvement of Rye mouth village between 1995 and Present.
It is obvious that no much changes in the residential area which located in the northwest. With only four house built to satisfy the demand of the residents in present. Farmland and the forest part now replaced by golf field and two tennis courts in northeast. The hotel and café shop in southeast still remain in the same position. Moreover, car park is built in the present which beside at the hotel.
As it can be seen from the maps, in southwest, there were five shop, six fish markets, and a fishing port in 1995. However, in present, the fishing port is no longer exists while the shops while the shops become restaurants and the fish market have been reconstructed to four accommodations.
Overall, the changes of this village during the past 20 years are very significant.
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which located in the northwest.
which is located in the northwest.
Farmland and the forest part now replaced by golf field
Farmland and the forest part now are replaced by golf field
car park is built in the present which beside at the hotel.
car park is built in the present which is beside the hotel.
the fishing port is no longer exists
the fishing port no longer exists
and the fish market have been reconstructed
and the fish market has been reconstructed
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