Problem with road in your area.
Write a letter to the concil
Introduce yourself
Explain the problem
What action you would like to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to bring to your attention of a road maintenance condition just behind my house on King street.
My name is Prathap, i have been a resident at number 250 , King street, Bangalore for over 10 years. I have never had any reason to complain to council until now.
Recently, there is a pothole appeared on the side of the road in the closest to my house. When it rains, the pothole will fill-up with water and becomes as an invisible danger to the drivers and also it is an eyesore to the residents of the vicinity.
I have complained the same to the council office couple of times over telephone, but still the problem exists. I would like to request your personal attention on this matter and make sure to take it as a priority by the road maintenance department.
I look forward to the issue being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Prathap
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-19 | prathapreddy | 90 | view |
- In many countries it is illegal to reject a potential employee on the basis of age.What are the positive and negative effects of this policy ? 70
- Some people say there should be only one official international language Others say that it is bad Discuss both views and give you own opinion 85
- Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing Explain where when and why 100
- Some people think that getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that now life of the elderly is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both and give opinion. 80
- You have decied to leave your current job even though you enjoy it.Write a letter to inform you manager of your decision. In your letterTell the manager about your decision and the reason for itDescribe what you learnt in you current jobask the manager to 80
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 686 1000
No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.342 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.412 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.836 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4