QUEEN MARY HOSPITAL ELUCIDATED BY THE GIVEN DIAGRAM BELOW SINCE ITS CONSTRUCTION IN 1960.
The diagram illustrates the improvement made in Queen Mary Hospital by three stages in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall, the shopping centre and farmland have demolished whereas the hospital and the car park remained the same. There were decreased in the size of the car park by half while cancer centre, pharmacy and nursing school have introduced.
In 1960, at the first stage of its development, the hospital was built next to the main road and close to the shopping centre. The area right behind of the hospital has turned into a car park while the area behind the shopping centre was farmland.
In the second phrase of improvement, there was an introduction of a pharmacy and a cancer building. While the shopping centre and the farmland were demolished the hospital and the carpark were remained unchanged. The shopping centre changed into pharmacy and a cancer building whereas the farmland has replaced by the nursing school.
In the last phrase of improvement on Queen Mary Hospital, all the buildings have remained same but the size has modified. Even though, the hospital and pharmacy had unchanged in size, car park and nursing school have showed a reduction in size. In comparison, the cancer centre showed the dramatic expansions as it tripled in size.
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