Some students have rented the apartment next to yours. Their parties are upsetting you, your family and other tenants.
Write a letter to the owner of the apartment. In your letter:
• describe the problem
• explain how the problem is affecting you, your family and other tenants
• say what you would like the owner of the apartment to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the students who are renting your apartment which is situated next to mine. Very often, they invite many adolescents for party at their place and their personal gathering goes until late in the morning. Moreover, they play loud music and make noise which is unacceptable. In addition purposely throw rubbish in the public areas of the building.
Although, I had talked to them, but their behavior is uncooperative and impolite. The situation is having detrimental effect not only for my family but for other tenants also. As I have to leave early to work, I normally go for sleep around 10:00 pm, but because of their late night parties I am not able to take a sound sleep in the night. Therefore, I feel tired next day in the office. Even, my son who has to appear for his final exam next month is not able to concentrate well on his studies.
I would be grateful, if you look into this matter urgently and request them to change their attitude and explain them, policies and noise regulation of a building. If in case, the things are not improved, further action is required.
Looking forward to have your swift response
Your’s faithfully
James
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In addition purposely throw rubbish in the public areas of the building.
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Although, I had talked to them, but their behavior is uncooperative
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Looking forward to have your swift response
Looking forward to having your swift response
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 212 200
No. of Characters: 955 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.816 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.505 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.398 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.791 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4