The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the development of the underground railway systems in six cities and provide information about the date opened,number of kilometers when passengers traveled per year.
Firstly,London was the oldest city to open in the year 1863 and the passengers traveled 775 millions per year and the distance traveled is 394 kilometers.Paris attained second place and launched in year 1900 travelling at a of 199 kilometers.The remaining Tokyo,Washington DC and Kyoto developed Los Angels is the latest railway system had opened in the year 2001.
It is interesting to found that ,among all Tokyo, which only 155 kilometers of route serves is the greatest number of passengers per year is 1927 millions.Kyoto is the smallest underground system where passengers travel at lowest rate is 45 per year.
Overall, the table reveals that the underground system is placed in various cities in different years and vary a lot in size to the number of passengers travel per year.
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Sentence: It is interesting to found that ,among all Tokyo, which only 155 kilometers of route serves is the greatest number of passengers per year is 1927 millions.Kyoto is the smallest underground system where passengers travel at lowest rate is 45 per year.
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The remaining Tokyo,Washington DC and Kyoto developed Los Angels is the latest railway system had opened in the year 2001.
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which only 155 kilometers of route serves is the greatest number of passengers per year is 1927 millions.
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