The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The provided table has clearly compared the consumer expenses proportion of three different classifications in the five countries in 2002.
From the first glance at the given information one of the first fact to note in the former is that Food, Drink and Tobacco occupy a greater percentage of consumer expenditure in five states, whereas Leisure and Education showed the lowest percentage in the given table
According to the given data, the ratio of Food, Drink and Tobacco calculated for the most significant proportion of consumer expenses in Turkey with 32, 14 %. In addition, despite of the percentage of Leisure and Education much less than the amount spent from previous category in Turkey, it was achieved the highest spending amounts from the other countries at 4, 35%. However, the amount of consumer expenses on Clothing and Footwear obtained the biggest ratio in Italy at 9%.
Furthermore, it is clear that Sweden experienced the lowest ratio of consumer expenses in terms of Food, Drink and Cigarette with 15, 77%. At the same time, the least proportion of Clothing and Footwear expenses was also came from Sweden at only 5,40% while the proportion of Spain has slightly over than these categories with 6,51% yet has the smallest proportion for Leisure and Education field.
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Sentence: The provided table has clearly compared the consumer expenses proportion of three different classifications in the five countries in 2002.
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despite of the percentage of Leisure and Education much less than the amount spent from previous category in Turkey,
despite the percentage of Leisure and Education which is much less than the amount spent from previous category in Turkey,
the least proportion of Clothing and Footwear expenses was also came from Sweden at only 5,40%
the least proportion of Clothing and Footwear expenses was also comingfrom Sweden at only 5,40%
the least proportion of Clothing and Footwear expenses also came from Sweden at only 5,40%
while the proportion of Spain has slightly over than these categories with 6,51% yet has the smallest proportion for Leisure and Education field.
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