The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisions where relevant.
A glance at the table providedreveals clear differences between several major metro systems all over the world in terms of age, scale and annual carrying capacity.
One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure that the older the metro system is, the longer it is. The oldest system which is established in 1863 is London. It is also the longest system with 1100 kilometers in length. Paris comes to second in terms of scale and age. Completed in 1890, it expands to 594 kilometers. The two latest established metro systems namely Kyoto and Los Angeles possess the shortest length com...
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One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure that the older the metro system is, the longer it is.
One particularly interesting fact is highlighted by the figure that the older the metro system is, the longer it is.
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Sentence: Regarding yearly carrying capaity, it ranges varingly among metro systems provided.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 197 200
No. of Characters: 970 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.924 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.679 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.324 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4