The table below summaries some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2000.
Write a report describing the sales figures of various type of publications based on the information shown in the table. You should write at least 150 words. -Syerapke-
The given table shows the classification of a college bookshop printed publication in February 2000. There are two kinds of membership and three kinds of printed publication revealed in this trend.
Overall, the highest number of books is bought by out-member was 2083 exemplar, while the book members purchased 1051 exemplars. Therefore, magazines were stance as the most purchased followed by non-fiction, and fiction books.
Take a closer with the bookshop sales, by 1249 magazines was bought by college students, 332 exemplar was bought by college staff, and the other 82 magazines were grabbed by public members, while the book club member just purchased 33 magazine in a month of February. Next, non-fiction books were the most favorite book for club member to purchase; sales reached to 942 exemplars. This figure was sold by 225 exemplar bought by the collegians, either staffs or students, and 122 books were purchased by public member. However, Fiction books were the least sales at all with 75 were bought by college non-member, zero sales in public member, and 76 exemplars were bought by the club member.
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the classification of a college bookshop printed publication in February 2000.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
the highest number of books is bought by out-member was 2083 exemplar,
the highest number of books which is bought by out-member was 2083 exemplar,
Sentence: Overall, the highest number of books is bought by out-member was 2083 exemplar, while the book members purchased 1051 exemplars.
Description: The fragment Overall , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Overall with adverb
Sentence: Therefore, magazines were stance as the most purchased followed by non-fiction, and fiction books.
Description: A verb 'to be', past tense, 2nd person singular or all is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to were and stance
non-fiction books were the most favorite book
non-fiction books were the most favorite books
flaws:
Content is not developed clearly.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 182 200
No. of Characters: 911 1000
No. of Different Words: 94 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.005 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.534 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.034 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.696 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4