The table gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. There are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
The table gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. There are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
London is the first and the oldest city builds underground railway system. It was opened in 1863 and having 775 millions of passengers per year. London is the greatest distance, on average 394 kilometers of route, while Kyoto is the fifth city uses underground railway system. It was opened in 1981 and having 45 millions of passengers per year. Kyoto is the shortest journey _ just 11 kilometers of route.
The second country opened underground railway system is Paris in 1900 and having 1191 millions of passengers per year. Paris is the second greatest distance, on average 199 kilometers of route, and then Tokyo followed in 1927 and having 1972 millions of passengers per year. Tokyo has the most passengers per year and the third country largest distance, on average 155 kilometers of route.
In 1976 and in 2001, Washington DC and Los Angeles also opened underground railway system with the distance average just 126 and 28 kilometers of route, and having passengers per year average 144 millions and 50 millions per year. Without Los Angeles is the newest of underground system, but Washington DC has average passengers larger and the distance was longer than Los Angeles per year.
Overall, London is the longest distance in six cities, but Tokyo has the most passengers per year, while Kyoto is the shortest journey and also having the lowest passengers per year.
- In order to solve traffic problems essay governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution 67
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the the world and in different continents.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 60
- Some people find history a fascinating subject other say it is dull and has no place in modern life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion give reason for you answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. 40
- The line graph shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- In Vietnam - Villages destroyed - People move to city - Crowded city - City with no hope - Using English to communicate - Move to American - Learn American English.The diagram illustrates the history Vietnam War and the reason Vietnamese Learn American E 60
London is the first and the oldest city builds underground railway system.
London is the first and the oldest city which builds underground railway system.
London is the greatest distance,
London has the greatest distance,
while Kyoto is the fifth city uses underground railway system.
while Kyoto is the fifth city which uses underground railway system.
Sentence: Tokyo has the most passengers per year and the third country largest distance, on average 155 kilometers of route.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to country and largest
Sentence: Overall, London is the longest distance in six cities,
Sentence: Overall, London has the longest distance in six cities,
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 252 200
No. of Different Words: 88 100
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 252 200
No. of Characters: 1240 1000
No. of Different Words: 88 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.921 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.512 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.589 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.495 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.702 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4